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Stephanie\'s Slavery
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Jan 4, 2006)
(This month 23159 readers) (Total 52305 readers) |
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After complaining that her boss was a slave driver, Stephanie is forced to really become his slave. |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jan 16, 2012 |
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Another excellent story from a Master Storyteller. Very believeable characters and seeing the current economic climate (today - 17 January 2012 - another 10,500 laid off in the UK)a believeable scenario. Just hope not too many bosses read this story or they might get ideas ....... mind you if it was the right Mistress, i might not complain too much. (10/10)
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radgirl
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Jan 12, 2006 |
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Excellent story, well worth reading! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jan 10, 2006 |
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Well done, but almost a GP-13. Well developed characters and even romantic. I have nothing against romance in its place, even on thi ssite, but this seemed rather tame for the genre. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 7, 2006 |
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10 says it all (10/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 6, 2006 |
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Obohobo, your stories are almost always wonderful, and this is no exception. Clearly written, showing fully 'fleshed-out' characters living normal human lives in real ways. This story was fun, and I was disappointed when it ended; I wanted more.
You have a fine skill for using the English language. Thence rises my single concern; it might be wise for you to find a willing reader for your stories before posting, just to help with the slang. Several of your terms are common to we Colonials (biskets for cookies and such). Some terms are difficult to discern, even from context. And those could use a little change, now and again, that we Cousins across the Pond might get full value from the story.
Can't wait for your next contribution, Obohobo. Fine work; among the best there is consistently (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
billemmons
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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Well worth the reading (10/10)
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