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Paula and her Mother-in-Law
Author: Ross Martin
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(Added on Jan 3, 2006)
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Paula meets her mother-in-law and other female relatives and is tortured most harshly over a period of one night. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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not bad if not a bit unrealistic for over a 24 hour period (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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Another fun and well-written entry. I always enjoy both the ideas and the storytelling this author brings to his work. This one was no exception. Enjoy! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jan 9, 2006 |
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good story, but were is the extreme? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jan 8, 2006 |
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This is reasonably good. You need to work on making the speech "sound" real, but that just takes practice; a little more description wouldn't be bad either.
One nit-pick - there's no scatology in this, nor would I count it "extreme". (7/10)
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