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Wonder Woman: Hell in Paradise
Author: DarthSaad
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(Added on Dec 26, 2005)
(This month 73052 readers) (Total 161447 readers) |
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Wonder woman. the amazons and other gorgeous heroines - captuerd and tortured without mercy! |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Nov 9, 2010 |
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A superb start!! The originality is refreshing, and the writing is superb. With the few exceptions of typos, the grammar was good. The only problem seems to be the creative juices ceased to flow long before the story line came to a conclusion. If the author had completed the story, I would have been able to easily give this tome the highest rating!!! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Devilsharvest
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Feb 24, 2007 |
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A Phantastic Storie abiut my Favourite theme Amazons in Peril. Good style , many diferent scenes so you donīt get bored . (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gilbert
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Jul 4, 2006 |
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I got a terrific hard-on reading this story !
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2006)
- What greater praise could I aspire to! Hope you are enjoying the second part just as much. If I might ask, though, what would have made it a 10 for you? I always find ways to improve. Enjoy, and thanks for the feedback.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 22, 2006 |
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Actually, I think the story is pretty good. The chapters are just too short.
(edit after chap 4) Story is an excellent example of its genre, and is pretty well told. Still need an editor to help with spell errors. Anxious for more!
(edit after chapter 6) Continues to get better and better. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2006)
- Thanks for your words of praise. Glad you are finding the story increasingly entertaining, and I just hope I can keep the trend going in part 2.
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| Reviewer:
TheMaster
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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Excellent start...looking forward to Wonder Woman's increased participation...one thing...review your work...the typos and mis-spellings kill the story line for the readers when they have to stop and figure out what you meat...see what I mean?
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- Replied by:
darthsaad
(Edit) (Jul 5, 2006)
- Hopefully part 2 satisfies the need for more participation from Diana - and I will try to keep the typos down. Thanks - DS
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 3, 2006 |
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Generally quite good, though with some lamentable typos. DarthSaad knows his characters (I'm assuming the masterminds on the others side of the video monitors are Darkseid and Desaad), but I have a different take on some of them. I think all of the Amazons and Koriander should be immune to discomfort due to nudity, which for all of them is about as natural as breathing. Certainly some of the human hereoines, like Dinah Lance (Black Canary) and Huntress might be affected, though. I like the ingenuity used by the villains to keep the heroines under control. VERY believable. And I think it was a good idea not to explain how the heroines found themselves in that situation to begin with. Far better to start in media res, as the author chose. I look forward to future chapters. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jaeger
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Dec 27, 2005 |
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I love comics, so this story amuses me. Keep going, and bring in Poison Ivy. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dr.Hass
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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I like the idea, but the story could be better... (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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ok but league these type stories to comic books (6/10)
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