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Sissy Stepdad
Author: Rocky
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(Added on Dec 18, 2005)
(This month 92253 readers) (Total 184486 readers) |
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The story of a man who becomes a sissified slave to his stepdaughter, and how he got there |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Deanna
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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Come on folks. This story is so poorly written and structured it deserves a 5 at best. I suspect the only reason anyone liked it is because they are guys who like to be dressed in women's clothes. Clue: no woman wants a fag! (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Nov 18, 2006)
- It seems your rating is based solely on the fact that you don't like the genre. However, if you have any true criticism of the writing itself, I'd certainly like to hear it. Vague comments such as "poorly written" will do nothing to improve anyone's writing.
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Rocky
(Edit) (Nov 18, 2006)
- It seems your rating is based solely on the fact that you don't like the genre. However, if you have any true criticism of the writing itself, I'd certainly like to hear it. Vague comments such as "poorly written" will do nothing to improve anyone's writing.
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| Reviewer:
themaneloco
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Aug 1, 2006 |
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I've enjoyed this story so far and I'm interested to see how the main character reaches his fate as outlined in the first chapter. I've also enjoyed the subtle D/s relationship forming with the younger sister and I'm hoping this will be further pursued, but this is your story and the direction is entirely up to you. Keep at it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- Thanks for taking the time to comment. I've been busy of late and haven't had much time to continue writing, but have been working on it whenever the time and desire coexist. I'm not sure how far the relationship with the sister will go at the moment, but will keep your comments in mind.
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| Reviewer:
gwen101
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May 19, 2006 |
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very effective description of submissive and humiliation for its own sake. More feminine clothes including more high heels would help. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (May 20, 2006)
- All that you've asked is in the works; I just have to figure out where to put it.
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Master_c
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Jan 16, 2006 |
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I don't usually read stories about a male being dominated, but I had nothing else to read and started this one. I couldn't stop reading it and can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. Well written and interesting. You have my attention and I will continue to read your stories, but you have to keep posting. Write more so I find out about this unlucky guy and what happens to him. I think you started just right and hope to see it continue bringing us up to the present time.
Job well done,
Charles (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2006)
- Don't worry...I'm still writing, and have recently uploaded a new chapter. I don't want to hurry this one, though. I made that mistake in another of my efforts, and it showed. Anyway, thank you for your encouraging words, and since this is still a work-in-progress at this point, any ideas you might have would be most appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
just4you11
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Jan 10, 2006 |
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I like what you have done - and even though as others have mentioned the 1st chapter is best later, where it is causes me to read with anticipation the next chapter to see if we are at the present yet...and to wait with anticipation, to see what the step dad is required to do next.
write on, there is little doubt I will read on... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jan 11, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments. I do have a couple more chapters drafted, but the story is changing quite a bit from what I first envisioned. Any suggestions would be most appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 24, 2005 |
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It is an interesting story, but the second chapter seems to be a more appropriate beginning chapter with a few tweeks. Great dialogue, space between paragraphs and conversations make it easier on the eyes. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Dec 27, 2005)
- I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I do appreciate the comments. Again, consider the main body of the story to be a flashback; the beginning and end are closer to the present day, with the middle - the high school years - being 20 to 30 years earler.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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Very good start but I think the second chapter needed to be the first. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Dec 22, 2005)
- The first part of the story is the present, as will be the ending. The middle part - which will be the meat of the story - is more of a flashback, explaining how he got where he is.
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Dec 21, 2005 |
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Very good start to a humiliating fantasy. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Dec 22, 2005)
- Thanks for the encouragement. This is a work in progress, so please pass on any ideas you might have.
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