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Blackmailing Joe
Author: BDSM Queen
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(Added on Dec 17, 2005)
(This month 13605 readers) (Total 30988 readers) |
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Joe goes to a conference in Mexico and comes home with more than he bargained for. Now he is being blackmailed by a woman from the conference. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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good isea but the story does not flow well (5/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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The theme is good, but I must agree; the cells are a distraction, plus the writing style seems stiff with no real flow to it. But having said that, I'm curious as to what happens to Joe now? Will there be a chapter two. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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I have to agree that the presentation cells are very distracting. The cells cause the story not to flow very well. Suggest that the story is improved by not using the presentation cells. (5/10)
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geoff
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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your writing doesn't 'flow' and the presentation in cells is so distracting I ended up just cutting and pasting into wordpad. OK, but lacks any real quality - a perfect 4 (4/10)
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