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A Visit to John
Author: Allene Blake
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(Added on Jul 1, 2001)
(This month 11820 readers) (Total 22024 readers) |
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Allene accepts spanking from neighbor for damaging car. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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This is one where you first need to wring your mind into the right state. Or better, into the setting of the story, else everything might seem a tad far-fetched. Well, maybe not far-fetched, but at least reeking of a lot of wishfull thinkingness of the author.
Now, who would I be to not indulge the author.
Allene is a very good one. Author I mean. She knows people and what goes on in their twisting little minds. Or what makes their wheels spin.
"A Visit To John" isn't an extraordinary story, but it was a nice read nevertheless. One you finish with a hint of a smile on your face.
I would have gone for an eight rating. But adding two points to even out a bit on readers who seem to have been hanging around with their pants on their ankles and had to pull them up again without having gotten some action. Poor lads.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 18, 2005 |
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iit did not the full story i assume means in there dialect anyway, that they did not read the whole story
4 is very, very gracious, the story was not hot, not erotic (4/10)
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Nitrofox
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Dec 15, 2002 |
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I don't understand matol11's rating. Especially since his sentence meant absolutely nothing: "I did not the full story"?? Oh well. I don't go for spanking much, and that was mostly what this was about. The sex scene was maybe 2 sentences long, and could easily be improved. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
matol11
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Aug 10, 2001 |
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I did not the full story (1/10)
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