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Beach Bum
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on Dec 8, 2005)
(This month 9903 readers) (Total 16057 readers) |
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A Master brings his lover to the beach to watch the sun rise |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Beswitchingly Positive
(Edit) |
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May 5, 2007 |
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Ah, finally the romantic side of the very reable Mad Lews, again, not to be a butt kisser, a lovely piece of writing.
This one like got a more unanimous rarting due to it's soft nature; I really loved this one, thanks you for providing me with such nice entertainment.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2007)
- Not that there's anything wrong with butt kissing as long as it's tasteful and leads to other activities.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Dec 13, 2005 |
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All kidding apart, I DO love the story!
Romantic D/s - not too hard, not too soft - and so amn readable ( and damn hot!)
recomended for start of the day!
"prostrate? lover " - couldn't resist! (not that it matters - who loves prostrate?)
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- Yeah you caught an edit that didn't get pulled, a lover prostrate not a lover of prostrate or for that matter prostate's must go beat the editor about the head and shoulders with a fexible yardstick.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 13, 2005 |
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Mad, beautiful. a gorgeous piece of love in print. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2005)
- Yeah chksng19, I just can't seem to kick the habit of writing romantic BDSM stories. Maybe I could alternate with some of the hard core tales. Thank you kindly for the great review.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Dec 12, 2005 |
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This short story doesn't contain any of the outrageous fucking flagellation many readers scan these pages for, however, it's an excellent piece--worth reading for the pure pleasure of good writing as much as its content.
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Yes, I brought a smile to my face too--very enjoyable.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2005)
- As usual you are too kind Alex, I suspect you're trying to get me to blush but I'm not that easy Luv.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 10, 2005 |
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Romantic tail of love on the beach. There are humorous visuals such as a master walking his pet that will bring a smile to your face. Plus, it is HOT! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Dec 11, 2005)
- My thanks for your most generous review Nikita.
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