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Honeymoon Surprise
Author: MustangSally
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(Added on Oct 28, 2005)
(This month 9520 readers) (Total 23769 readers) |
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Charlie gives Alice what she really wanted but could ask for. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Nov 1, 2005 |
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that was so good! first just let me say that i luv your name. it is one of my most favourite songs. now, the story. character development is good, they are 'real people' in a 'real' situation. well written and for me, very erotic! would love to see more if you would like to post. respectfully blu (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Oct 29, 2005 |
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A very nice little story. A little light and perhaps too gentle for some but a story with realistic characters in a very realistic scenario. Nice first story, I hope there are more on the way. (9/10)
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