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Taking Grace Freeman
Author: taskmaster11
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
(This month 50390 readers) (Total 98854 readers) |
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After a chance encounter, a very young man lusts after, plans and then executes the subjegation of a middle aged woman with her own secrets. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
sarahbunnyuk
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May 8, 2010 |
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I loved this story, very sexy and almost completely my own fantasy, especially the part where she was gagged with her own undies and tights, lovely!
I'd give it a higher rating, but not being a professional, I don't feel that I know enough about writing, but simply that the story was very sexy for me. Thanks!
Further to my original review (above) I'm upping the rating to 9, as I'm still re-reading this and getting a buzz from it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
johhny
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2005)
- hi sarahbunny?
many thanks for reviewing my story and of for the score!
It is actually my first attempt at submitting a story. The plot I guess it partof a fantasy of mine in my ealrly years after experiencing a similar encounter when I did actually work in a filling station during student years. Although I hasten to add the fantasy began and ended only with seeing the okder lady concerned at the filling station! I am working on part two, hope you read and enjoy it also.
cheers
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Massen
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Feb 3, 2007 |
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Very good, would like more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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i will adjst my rating when you post more, there simply is not enough here to realy pass judegment based on the story line
I look foward to more and increased my rating for you (8/10)
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- Replied by:
johhny
(Edit) (Oct 10, 2005)
- hi, 'Taking Grace' is my first ever attempt. As such I welcome any/all critism and or encouragement. The initial storyline is one from one of my (long past) youthful fantasies. I am working on the next part of this story. many thanks
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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A good beginning, with the addition continuing the quality. Looking for more! (8/10)
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zyd
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Nov 2, 2005 |
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This story was hot! I enjoyed reading it very much. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
johhny
(Edit) (Nov 3, 2005)
- maby thabks for your comments. I am working on part two as I write, should soon be ready
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