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Jack - The Party (illustrated story) Author: Bo Varg
(Added on Sep 26, 2005) (This month 32834 readers) (Total 89544 readers)
Jack's biggest client, Alf Cleghorn invites the BDSM-society to a garden party where he is going to introduce his new found sex slave and her daughter to the society, but something goes terribly wrong at the party

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Average Rating: (5.5/10)
Highest Rating: (6/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: nikita (Edit) Rating: Apr 20, 2006
The illustrations were good and I followed the story better by looking at the piccies. The most important thing you must do is to get a new editor. (6/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Apr 1, 2006
Is English your second language? The story seems to say so. Many, many spelling and "wrong word" errors; you need an editor, badly. (3/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2005
So-so writing, needs a lot of improvement in plot development, and grammar. Also, that switching fonts was kind of annoying, too. (5/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2005
A Fair start, would have liked a little longer first chapter. (6/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Sep 26, 2005
This was an interesting start, but it would be better if you made your installments somewhat longer. 9K is a bit short. (6/10)

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