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At Gestapo Headquarters
Author: von Hentzau
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(Added on Sep 21, 2005)
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Poor Suzanne was only passing notes for her boyfriend. The Gestapo is not amused when all she can say is "I know nothing." |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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Well written and effective telling of an old tired story. You make it sit up and take notice, once again. More expository writing of the inner thoughts of the victim would make the tale score higher. Looking forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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General_Dom
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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A great start to a story I will be checking in with frequently. Oberst is a nicely sadistic villain. (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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This was quite enjoyable, though a little unrealistic, given the Gestapo's noted efficiency with "interrogation". But then, the real thing was a little stomach-churning.
My only real problem is the lack of feeling that the main protagonist is really in danger. Only the female interrogator gives any real sense of menace, one reason I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Your writing is crisp and clear, and your skills good. I would suggest you manually review your writing after computer spellchecking it next time - computers don't catch instances of misspellings when they make a proper word (as with "sells" for "cells".
A good piece. (8/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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First rate. Excellent pacing, inventive torments, credible dialogue. A fine effort from a fine writer. (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Very good writing! But protecting no man is worth that ... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tinglee
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Very believable beginning, and very well written. However much too mild for the Gestapo, maybe Frau Buesch will, step things up somewhat. Let's have more soon. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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goos story will recommend it to others (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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Very Well Done !!!! (9/10)
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