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Lucas New Slave Family
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Sep 21, 2005)
(This month 16727 readers) (Total 32419 readers) |
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Lucas already dominated his white wife and her sister. Why not their mother too. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
routi
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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You must continue this great story' please! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
MistressKali
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Sep 23, 2005 |
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the use of lease instead of leash once.. I can see. repeated use just plain detracts from the story. the characters were not very fleshed out, I have no idea why any of these people would consent to being used this way from what was written. Its a good start... and could be a quality story if reworked. (3/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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not as good as most of your are but i stil love rwsding your stories (5/10)
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Reviewer:
NightOwl
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Sep 21, 2005 |
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sorry - dont like it (2/10)
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