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You Never Know
Author: lipsticked
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(Added on Sep 2, 2005)
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Steven becomes the property of his dominant neighbor and her mother. He discovers the reality of his situation only after it is too late. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Jan 26, 2007 |
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Nice, I liked it. I have two problems, one is that the scope of the story is too big (or the story is too short). Apart from the original enslavement everything else is just a blur. Give us some details about the capture of the others or leave it completely out. This middle way doesn't work. I would like more details about his 2nd and 3rd day, about his 1st night, about the first time he tried to fight back or at least refused to do something.
The other is that old cliche that the abductors are all powerfull and the victims are all broken in a few days.
The story misses a lot of tags. F/f, F+/f, F/m, watersports, modification, nc, blackmail, scatology and probably some others I can't think of right now. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mshaw
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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Well written, liked all everything but the scat. (9/10)
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