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The Messenger of Pain
Author: Jay Merson
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(Added on Aug 31, 2005)
(This month 23078 readers) (Total 46044 readers) |
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It`s the fifteen hundreds, times when starvation was the result of failure for most people, times when the law was harsh and the punishments more so. This man has a message to carry to the wanton sluts in the prison service care. Those whores of society, fit only for sexual use and abuse, fit only to be whipped, thrashed and tortured as he sees fit. The messenger does all of that and more! The governors daughter and wife are made to do things together. Has this man no heart? It appears not and that is just the beginning. WARNING: Contains extremely hard and nasty scenes. |
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| Reviewer:
Jeneric
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Oct 28, 2005 |
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I'm finding myself drawn more and more into the crueler aspects of stories on this site. This was by far, the cruelest I have read so far. I'm quite relieved to see I'm not the only one with a twisted mind ;-) I'm looking forward to reading more from you Jay. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
RichardStryker
(Edit) (Oct 28, 2005)
- You can find a lot more of Jay's twisted mind at
www.a1adultebooks.com/site.php
Just click on the author catalogue and look for his titles.
Mine are there too by the way.
Richard Stryker
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nikita
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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Memorable Things About Your Story:
1. Good Title
2. Used a lot of words, some twice in one sentence
3. Good story setting
4. Conveyed that the main character was evil
The only criticism, (and I hate to do it,) is to fire your proofreader.
You'll have to excuse me as I am a first time reader of your stories and, to be fair, I should read a few more. (6/10)
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Dododecapod
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Sep 10, 2005 |
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An excellent (and quite heavy) piece. If I were to make any criticism at all, it would be that the Messenger was perhaps a little repetitious, but that would be quibbling indeed.
Your writing is well-paced and your word-choice faultless. Further, your editing is professional, and of exceptional quality. This piece is enthralling and erotic, I cangive it no less than the highest rating. (10/10)
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billjam
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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I wasn't familiar with this author but certainly will read more of his work. I love historical pieces with their assumption that those in power can satisfy their lust without fear of recrimination. Well-written and fast paced story. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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Jay, welcome to the BDSM Library. I'm a huge fan of your work; purchasing it through the www.a1adultebooks.com site. Thank you for bringing a treat. Ruby
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For those who are into NC hard and rough, this is quite an extreme tale of cruelty and the pleasure one man gains by giving pain. (10/10)
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