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Confessions of a Slaver
Author: Rocky
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(Added on Aug 24, 2005)
(This month 78770 readers) (Total 157280 readers) |
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Something I've dusted off from the dark recesses of my hard drive. The recollections of a middle-aged man preparing to retire from a successful career as a white slaver. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
irishman112145
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Oct 21, 2008 |
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I have waited until you had written severalchapters to post a comment. This story leave me wanting more. I hope that it will continue for a long time. (10/10)
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brea
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Feb 10, 2007 |
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I loved it.Read it all in one sitting. wouldn't mind seeing your bad twin get into some trouble himself????just a thought.brea (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Feb 11, 2007)
- Glad you're enjoying it. I'm still trying to figure out where it's going to end up, but have some ideas that I think readers will like. Any suggestions, of course, would be most appreciated.
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Rocky
(Edit) (Feb 11, 2007)
- Glad you're enjoying it. I'm still trying to figure out where it's going to end up, but have some ideas that I think readers will like. Any suggestions, of course, would be most appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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I'm glad to see you back. Thank you for the story. Afraid I can't offer anything to improve your work, I'm not good enough.
Keep up the good work as soon as you can. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2007)
- Thanks for the kind words. It took a while, but I was finally able to get in the right frame of mind to write some more. I have the next chapter drafted, and just need to flesh it out before posting. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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Well done. A wild ride indeed.Little bit of everything. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2006)
- Thanks. There will be more to come, but I'm just not sure when I'll find the time or inclination. I've discovered that I need to be in the right frame of mind for writing these things; when I'm not, the story tends to suffer.
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qwert
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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Started off really strong, but seems to be losing focus and direction. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2005)
- Agreed, at least for the moment. I originally had something a bit different in mind for the most recent chapter, but felt I needed to keep things somewhat realistic. It ended up being little more than filler, though, and I was disappointed in it myself. I'm probably going to let the story rest for a week or two, until I get a better idea of how I want to flesh this one out.
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Rocky
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2005)
- The story will probably end here, as the site will soon be removing it due to the prohibitions now in place regarding descriptions of underage sex.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Interesting ideas. Well written. I hope the author is moved to write more chapters. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 11, 2005)
- I'm working on it, but no telling when I'll get the time. This story is sort of taking on a life of its own, so I'm not real sure where it's going.
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BigCat
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Good stuff. Keep it up. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 11, 2005)
- Thanks. Any suggestions on where this should go would be appreciated. It's a work in progress, and I don't have a clue how it's going to end.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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I hoped this will turn out to be complementary to "Memoirs of a S G." Well, it isn't - or at least not yet as of this reading (p1-3)
Oh, it is very good and hot (but of course). Loved the twist of bad twin/good twin theme - I hope you will explore it some more. Also, the applied system was sooo systematic with occasional flash of real invention (cherry popping scene mmmm )
(I do believe that many readers will find this hotter reading than Memoirs. And they will be probably right! Degustibus non disputatum.
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perhaps the story coulg go on into the big wide world outiside the campus, And the sis please!
q: THAT Prince is descendant of THIS Prince, yes?
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 3, 2005)
- Thanks again, pejanon. I'm not sure exactly where this story will go, but it will certainly follow our protagonist as he expands his horizons to the outside world. The sister, Carolyn, will probably disappear soon...but may return later; I haven't thought that far ahead. Remember, I'm looking at a chronology of perhaps 20 to 25 years here. No telling what will pop into my decadent mind between now and when I finally finish it!
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| Reviewer:
mstrger
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Aug 30, 2005 |
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Another very enjoyable story. Looking forward to moe chapters (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the story. I don't know how long it will be until I can get additional work done on it, but I do have some ideas drafted up.
- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2005)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 24, 2005 |
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is a good story and recommendable (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to review it. This is another as-yet unfinished story; I'm working on it as time permits, but still haven't figured it all out yet. Any thoughts on where the story line should take us?
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