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Closure
Author: Emma Kaufmann
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(Added on Jun 8, 2001)
(This month 8728 readers) (Total 22840 readers) |
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Two women come face to face with their hidden desires and confront the dark side of sexuality. |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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Not bad. Nice pace. Short but held my attention. (5/10)
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Cleo671
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Nov 22, 2003 |
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I think it opened very well.. was well written thoughout, but it could have been spaced out a bit more - either more longer or more parts. Being only one part, the characterisation,character frustrations.. the banter between both women took up too much of the story and the erotica was very rushed..so much so that I really wonder whether any arousal 'takes' place between the two women at all, sure it's 'fiction', but it has to also be plausible in the erotic/sexual arousal context.
Really let go and extend the story..because it's well written.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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This is a cleverly told and well written tale for the most part but I didn't think it very erotic. In a very short story, the bdsm scene is extremely brief (and largely unsatisfying) and most of the story is taken up with coverage of the narrator's frustrations. The main question posed in the earlier part of the piece (is she bisexual?) remains unanswered at the end, which is a frustration in itself. The story is also a little difficult to follow in parts, as there are few indications as to the identities of the speakers in the dialogues. (5/10)
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charles
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Oct 18, 2002 |
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I thought that this was a first class story. Good characterisation and excellent depiction of situations and places. It had the great merit of psychological truth. Like many men I often find lesbian sex arousing, especially if there is a bit of s&m. But although the story is psychologically interesting, I found it a bit flat erotically. The narrator started out bored and cheesed off and never really livened up.
The final sentence is a master/mistress stroke. (9/10)
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