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America Mastered
Author: UnDreampt
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
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In the year 2011, a mass assassination is performed by a secret organization called Fanatic Islamic Master Operations. The US is conquered and its people enslaved. The American people have no rights and new Masters, who are intent on punishing them for their sins against the world! |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Iwatchmywife
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Excellent start - why did you not continue? It was just getting interesting with the prospect of more serious action taking place. Some aspects a bit far fetched (but it was coded sci-fi which I take to mean not based in real life)but a good vehicle for some interesting scenes. (7/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Not much of the sci fi genre but the author could have just continued with one or two characters and developed the story that way. (5/10)
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Engineer
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Oh no, now the Islamists hysteria has reached SM fiction! Story is technically ok, but has a too-plain, sometimes silly content. (4/10)
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the prussian
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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I think that you are very good at writing. Unfortunately the subject is offensive. As a third generation german, the only trick left out was : "show me your papers". Please try to use what seems to be a very fine imagination to write something a little more fictional. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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forget it, keep your full time job (3/10)
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barfiner13
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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This thing reads like a college term paper. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are just fine, but the villains are one dimensional and silly.
I suppose if you're a rabid anti-American you could jack off to this, but then why not just listen to the BBC or read the New York Times?
(4/10)
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