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The Sanctuary
Author: WolfenDom
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(Added on Aug 6, 2005)
(This month 15934 readers) (Total 23735 readers) |
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a young girl discovers her desires to become a sexslave fulfilled as she learns about her own needs and the ways of a submissive |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
balorlv
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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The language is rather stilted and the plot and character devopment is lacking. The story is also written in the first person and reads more like a resume of the author. Considering he put his emaill address in there, perhaps that was his intent. Ther are minor fixes need such as using the same font thourgout the story. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
WolfenDom
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2005)
- ...thankfully...I could rather master the spelling of the english language before I showed the world my obvious inabilities to express myself, wouldn't you think?...
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