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What Do You Really Want?
Author: DogandBunny
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(Added on Aug 2, 2005)
(This month 35355 readers) (Total 43970 readers) |
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The ongoing story of a Dom and sub who meet online then begin a journey of discovery of who they are and how far they will go. Written from both points of view. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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good job, nice story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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Brilliant stuff, I really enjoyed this one! I have to say why I didn't give it a "10" - the changeover from "I/him" to "you/me" and back again was a little jarring.
Now the plus points. The dialogue in the sex scenes really added to the story, the addition of the extra characters was great too. Best of all was the surprise when "he" went to "her" house without permission, and her fear mounted wonderfully as she realised she'd promised him anything.
Both authors were equally good, and linked together well - I look forward to future work from you with anticipation! (9/10)
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