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The Island
Author: Wild Rose
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(Added on Aug 2, 2005)
(This month 51540 readers) (Total 105928 readers) |
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Without any memory of her past, a young woman wakes in a new world of an all-female penal colony, built on hierarchy and obedience. She finds a mistress who is not exactly free herself - but things are were different from what the appear in any way. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Excellent account of a rather confused and mystified woman and the reluctant surrender to her predicament.
A pity that there's a huge chance the story won't be completed, as (like azrlg17 said) these are the opening chapters of a published book...
JJ (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Jun 11, 2007 |
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Interesting plot, believable characters. Reads a lot like an uber Xena. Lots of detailed descriptions of canings, whippings, spankings,... Not much sex in the classical sense.
The story here is the 1st couple of chapters of a published book. I think the author should put that in the description because without it it feels a bit like deceitful advertising.
(8/10)
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phoenix072124
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Oct 9, 2006 |
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Excellent story, never a dull minute and a pleasure to read. (10/10)
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tragedy3
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Feb 12, 2006 |
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that was an incredible story. i loved it. no men, what a concept. you have a real talent of making your charcters come alive. thanks for a really plesurable read. (10/10)
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Engineer
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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A very well-written, never-boring description of a fascinating environment and strong relationships. The sense of justice, duty and loyalty is striking. Unfortunately, the author too much relied on accountancy, extreme numbers, and frequent excesses of beating. (8/10)
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Winnie
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Oct 1, 2005 |
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I too think this is one of the best stories I have read in a long while. Well written with few, if any, mistakes that cause confusion and has to be read a few times to understand what is being said. If it keeps up like this I hope to read lots and LOTS more. Bravo Wild Rose. (10/10)
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Forever_hers
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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This is the story I always hunt for but never before found online. The way Wild Rose portrays the delicate bond between dom and sub is incredible. I hope to read more of it soon! Thank you... ^_^ (10/10)
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sunburststrat
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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What a huge pleasant surprise. This is as good as anything I've read on this site. I was totally captivated after only a few paragraphs. I hope this will be a long story. (10/10)
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2licks4u3
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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could almost feel the single tail and cane...
thank you :) (9/10)
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newwmember
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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It's not only because I like this kind of stories - which is more : that one's approach is different and well constructed, if english is not the author's native language i would feel lucky if my english would be so well! Waiting for further installments. (10/10)
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chink1167
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Sounds really good so far. I like the way the story is heading. I hope it continues without excessive violence and snuff but thats just me. If english isnt your first langiage I am impressed. Well done (9/10)
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BruceCC
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Sweet! Original idea, excellent descriptions, what more could we ask for. Characters are a little weak, but that is to be expected due to the memory loss of the main character. I am looking forward to reading more in the very, VERY near future. (10/10)
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Dododecapod
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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This is a great start. I much prefer long, continued tales to PWP instalments, and best of all is the continuing tale with good grammar and spelling, something well-written.
You say English is a second language to you, but I say I would not have believed it if I had read this story first, instead of your disclaimer. I cannot fault any aspect of your mastery of the craft of writing.
I am waiting with great anticipation for your first sexual scene in this universe. You have managed to convey the complexities of the two women's relationship in only a few sentences, and I wait impatiently for you to do the same with the more sensual events - possibly including the promised whippings.
I will watch carefully for the continuation. (9/10)
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pet10
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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The author has a stunning imagination. It is very clever start in the dreamland of future! Man can read about a witty idea of a female island-prison with welcome-whipping without wardress and every day twice spanking, hierarchy of inmates of prison etc. I think the story will be very good. (10/10)
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