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Darkest Fantasy
Author: Joanna
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(Added on Jun 4, 2001)
(This month 23648 readers) (Total 34055 readers) |
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Everybody has his/her own darkest fantasy. These two girls talked about their own fatasies and help each other to fulfil them. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
WildCat
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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Loved the story - there were too much I could relate to in it, being a girl with dark fantasties yet totally in love with a guy like Richard in your story, yet also being drawn to unfaithfulness with 'hunks' - the build up was amazing, I was trying hard not to come in my pants before the climax of the story comes but was a little disappointed at the climax - it was too soft and romantic for me, not that romantic isn't good. Anyway, good one, keep it up. As for others saying its too sensual or boring or whatever, ignore it - too many hardcore torture bdsm readers on this site ;) (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Jun 12, 2001 |
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I liked this story. It was perhaps a slow, but I prefer that to the usual. Like too many stories, it really only revolved around a single sexual encounter, but at least there was some background and a bit of insight to the characters thoughts and feelings. I thought more could have been done with Sophie (not to mention a different name--she sounds like a washer woman). Although the buildup was a bit long, at least there was one. The encounter was maybe a bit milder than the story coding might lead you to expect, I found it erotic none the less. Also it was well written with no major problems with spelling or grammar. I gave it an extra point for that. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jun 10, 2001 |
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Talk, talk, talk, talk, talk. I nearly fell asleep waiting for anything to happen, and when it did, it wasn't worth waiting for! I would take serious exception to the type of rating it received. There was nothing hard core or serious about this piece of fluff. Reader beware! (4/10)
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