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A Month
Author: K. C. Richardson
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(Added on Jul 30, 2005)
(This month 52505 readers) (Total 87786 readers) |
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A submissive young wife learns she'll have to accept punishment not only from her husband, but also her in-laws! This is Chapter 1 of a longer story. Let me know if you'd like more of it. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Another most excellent first-time contribution from a promising writer.
Sadly, also another 'promises-promises' saga, as the tale seems to have been abandoned... a pity.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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finaly something different and entertaining at the same time (10/10)
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ravenfish55
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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a good descriptive story of a marriage with a difference, well written, with plenty of action and room for much more descriptive and erotic action between mum dad son and wife. (9/10)
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rhmusic
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Nov 22, 2005 |
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Yum. More please. I so love punishments within the family unit! (10/10)
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jeanne
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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Excellent - the visual touch of a shaved submissive pussy, the exquisite constraint of no sex and all painful fun, the delicious promise of a full month! Yes, certainly, much more is needed! (10/10)
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LordVetinari
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Wow! What a fantastic story! I really can't wait to see additional chapters. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Aug 2, 2005 |
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Wonderful. Chapter one stands alone as a hot short story, yet teases for more. I especially liked the way her husband checked up on her...though I wonder if the little lady will ever have a safe word / signal. As fantasy its great, in reality, I wonder if she could have taken that spanking without passing out.
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On another note, for me the punishment goes on way too long, because it has ceased to be pleasure by any means for the sub. This can be quite wonderful for the fantasy read and for those who enjoy overly sadistic sessions. If this was done in real life, I would hope someone would be smart enough to stop the session. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
LordVetinari
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2005)
- As far as you comments about reality, I must disagree. I have seen (and participated in) scenes at least as intense. The subs involved agree that those were amongst the hottest scenes they had ever had.
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Ruby
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2005)
- Yes, such scenes are hot and intense in real life and in fantasy. Comments were made that she wasn't "wet" anymore. For me this meant she wasn't enjoying the spanking. Perhaps, that's what was missing for me, a clear take on her emotions. We all know she's a pain slut and her family is more than willing to give her a good amount of pain. What we don't know is how far she is willing and able to take it. IMO: if she has no way to communicate beyond someone else assessing the damage to her body, then the session isn't safe and borders on nonconsensual. Depending on where you take this character, you may want to add that code to your story. Reluctant is perfect for chapter one.
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RhondaLee
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Aug 1, 2005 |
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A husband teamed up with his parent. That's a new idea. Innovative. (9/10)
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newguru
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Aug 1, 2005 |
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Best story I have read here in ages. Good character development. I really like where the story is going. Looking forward to more chapters on this one. (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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K.C. brings a whole new meaning to family values. I await the continuation, I don't see any way you can improve on the story but I'm willing to be surprised (10/10)
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YNHumiliator
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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Love the humiliation aspects and well written - can't wait for the next chapter! (9/10)
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C_Lakewood
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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While flogging a pussy with a rawhide cat may be
a tad brutal for my taste (which runs more to
humiliation than to pain), still, the many
virtues of this story outweigh a paltry vice.
"High Quality" in all facets. (9/10)
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bobanddianne
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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Exuberant, stunning and delightful. Well thought out and open to more complex development... this could go on year after year and dianne and I surely hope it does. (10/10)
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P4C0
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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nice job, keep it comming (10/10)
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ms pleasure
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Very good. Enjoyed it very much and wait expecantly for the next of hopefully many chapters. (8/10)
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willman
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Well written and sets the stage for multiple variations. Keep the chapters coming. (9/10)
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ivynow
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Well-written and detailed. (7/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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This is an absolute winner! It has a good cast of strange people, and the perfect foil for their kinky outlets. The writing is good and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Normally I don't rate one chapter inputs very highly, but for this one I'll make an exception. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kcrichardson
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2005)
- Thank you. I appreciate the kind feedback. Since I've never submitted a story to this site before, I decided to post just the first chapter to gauge response. I'm working on Chapter 2 now and hope it lives up to your expectations.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2009)
- It did. So, there's no need to be shy any longer. You CAN post the second part. And, maybe, the other 17 parts you surely must have written in the meantime...
JJ
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