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Lesbian Teachers in Discipline
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 13, 2005)
(This month 22118 readers) (Total 42533 readers) |
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Two lesbian teachers thought their secret was safe till a young female student finds out. |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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the one issue i have unless it was me is that the second half of the first part is the same as the first part, you seem to have repeated everything (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mistresscandy
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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I had high hopes when I saw the title for this one, but sadly theres nothing in here that hasnt already been done.. It feels very very rushed, and unrealistic in how it all starts up.. The grammer and spelling mistakes make this a very difficult read as well. Also I notice you even get the characters mixed up, I sometimes find myself thinking, "which character is speaking this line?"
You really need to proof read, or have someone proof read it for you. And this isnt just for this story, but its a constant habit in all the stories I've read that you've put up. (1/10)
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