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Glory Be
Author: Jan
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(Added on Jul 7, 2005)
(This month 23549 readers) (Total 44953 readers) |
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Committed to her faith, teen-age Jan is determined to do real penance, the way every Catholic girl should. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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pharma
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Mar 21, 2016 |
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Really hot! in all meanings )) (9/10)
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nm.jayhawk
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Short short stories are a difficult medium at best. Jan seems to have mastered the art. I would certainly like to see more work from this author. This is an absolutely excellent contribution to the Library. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Exquisite!
JJ (10/10)
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pollycoventry
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Jun 22, 2007 |
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god hpw lovly and exciting
really sad so short (10/10)
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Tenebrous
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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Suberb! please write more! (9/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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Wow. Some story. You know of what you write. (9/10)
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Cthrag Yaska
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Excellent!
A really novel idea that works exceedingly well. I'm not religious, but I got a real sense of Jan's devoutness coming through. Would love to read other episodes building towards (although not necessarily including) the crucifixion. (9/10)
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AlexMexico
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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wow, this is really hot. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
badcatholicgirl
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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very good especially lik the religious themes, would lik to see more parts, lik the short stories, good length, maybe masturbating to a cross with thorns, lik to read further pts
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- Replied by:
jan
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thank you very much for your kind review, badcatholicgirl (and i love your handle)! i very much like your idea, (masturbating to a cross with thorns), also!
Yours,
jan
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mkemse
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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strange but a great story (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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Wow. That is - just plain impressive. The combination of the prayer and the self-torture is extremely powerful.
Your writing is very sparse and clean, very precise; I enjoy it. However, the run-on pieces that indicate fast speech, though a powerful literary conceit, makes the reading a little difficult at times. Breaking each such incidence into separate paragraphs might help.
Otherwise, excellent. Will you be creating a sequel to this? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jan
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thank you very much for your kind words, sir! You're quite right about my little 'literay conceit', and i fully understand that it makes it somewhat more difficult to read. But, as an amateur writer, it really was all i could think of!
Yours,
jan
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LordVetinari
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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Weird, but in a brilliantly erotic way. Twisted and disturbing, and well worth the read! (9/10)
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Spitman
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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A stunning story. Reading it I could feel the pain. Ouch! The idea was exceptional, totally original. Is the crucifixion going to be in a further story, I wonder, or are we going to be treated to more of the preparation? I look forward to more work by this author. (9/10)
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jan
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2005)
- Thank you, Spitman, Sir (and to all the reviewers).
I did not plan to write a crucifixion story to continue this (that seems to be a much more imposing task, and hard to make original). But perhaps i will try.
Yours,
jan
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| Reviewer:
NarutosRamen
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Jul 7, 2005 |
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Nice stuff...I think an update to this story would be very enjoyable, and I wish you well and hope writer's block never rears it's ugly head for you. (9/10)
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