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The Squire the Son and the Girl Author: Mirabile Dectu
(Added on Jul 7, 2005) (This month 31587 readers) (Total 52204 readers)
The Son goes to his fathers friend who is a slave dealer.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: tina.matthews (Edit) Rating: Jul 11, 2005
It is an excellent read, you really have it in you, what good writers have.The only thing is that you need to pay more attention to the punctuation and more importantly dont keep most of it in a passive voice.(Do I sound like your english teacher?*sorry*)
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I liked it when Elaine (do i have the spelling right?) choose not to marry and be sold, just for her Father. I hope somewhere down the way she finds love again. (7/10)

Reviewer: MegsMaster (Edit) Rating: Jul 9, 2005
I like the theme very much and hope that it will prgress to the slave brothel. It is a bit difficult to read in large block paragraphs and would have been easier had it been split up less regularly. (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 8, 2005
enjoyable where to from here?? (6/10)

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