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Predator and Prey
Author: rbbral
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(Added on Jul 3, 2005)
(This month 20884 readers) (Total 38579 readers) |
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A young male sub answers an ad placed by a dominatrix for a live-in slave. He prepares for their first meeting, dressing in a rubber catsuit. Soon she arrives and has him under control. She appears to be a very serious mistress, and things for him begin to quickly slide out of control. The ending has a twist too. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
bullfinch
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May 28, 2008 |
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super story. well written. more please (9/10)
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Reviewer:
adeadeasyone
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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Would love to hear what happens when she unwraps her new possession (8/10)
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Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 9, 2005 |
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I'm not sure what to make of this one really. I gave it some time to sink in, but it didn't help. I liked the writing and the eroticism, but the permanent nature was a bummer. I guess the internal squabble in my head comes out as an 9. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
charlestudor
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Jul 4, 2005 |
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Right up my alley, meeting my sub fantasies! Couldn't stop reading, and can't wait for future installments. (10/10)
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