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Beer Run - The Corruption of Taylor
Author: Akasha
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(Added on Jun 28, 2005)
(This month 18793 readers) (Total 44412 readers) |
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A dominant woman seduces a young man while on a business trip, taking his strap on virginity among other things. |
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| Reviewer:
psychopixi
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Jan 4, 2007 |
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Fantastic story. Well written in general, and I love the detail you give on her thoughts throughout the proceedings. (10/10)
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adeadeasyone
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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Love the pychological aspect of her domination. Would love to hear more on his corruption (10/10)
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pr_squared
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Dec 16, 2005 |
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Great story - well told. I love the restrained language and gritty realism. (10/10)
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Ranai
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Jul 1, 2005 |
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Powerful, sexy, excellently told. ‘I think Taylor believed he was off the hook at that point. After all, I had cum - didn't that mean it was the end?’ – love it! Laconic observations, vivid descriptions, good insights into the desires that drive the characters. I admire your style.
As for dialogue, I would not mind characters who have a few things to say on matters beyond the sexual proceedings. When you build a plot with its own suspense, and integrate your erotic writing into it, you take the step from the ‘Plot? What plot?’ genre towards ‘Storytelling with Erotic Scenes’. Just takes more plotting and planning ahead to construct a well-rounded storyline with opening, development and conclusion that makes readers pant for ‘More, more!’ not only because they love your way of writing erotica, but also because you have created an interesting situation or conflict and readers simply want to know ‘What happens next?’ The storytelling skills are certainly there. (9/10)
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Microwave0ven
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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Wonderful story! You say in two weeks you'll be back withmore? Definitely will drop by then! Awesome storyline and the descriptions of feelings for both sides was really good. (9/10)
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sunburststrat
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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Damn! This is hot! I think I'll start reading more f/m stores. This was only my second and it was a gem! I loved the confidence of the domme and how she played Taylor. Well done! And yes, come back in two weeks!!! (9/10)
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chuck
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Jun 29, 2005 |
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Well written and a great story. I would love to see what happens in two weeks... pleeease. (10/10)
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