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The Bridge Club
Author: Arika Lee
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(Added on Jun 15, 2005)
(This month 81223 readers) (Total 144618 readers) |
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An ambitious lawyer has decided that a wealthy socialite holds the key to her future...and she is right. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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Excellent story & a must read! I only wish there were more...I'd love to read about Judith's full submission! (10/10)
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bullfinch
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May 4, 2008 |
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super story. a pity it has not been continued. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 16, 2006 |
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Great story!
Very well written, with good creation of the setting and atmosphere/mood...
Tho I sometimes had to struggle with the willingness and lack of spine Judith displays, I on the other hand can follow those 'flaws', by the blind ambition that drives her...
Though the story seems to have come to an end, I do hope there is more to follow; there's room for further development...
JJ (10/10)
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azrlg17
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Dec 16, 2006 |
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The good stuff:
The sex was well written, good grammar and spelling.
The bad stuff:
The whole story felt forced. I always had the feeling not Emily but the author forced Judith. E.g. a young, beautiful and hungry summa cum laude attorney starts in a small city? If she's so hungry why doesn't she try it in NY, LA, London or where the big fish swim?
How would a normal not submissive woman react when a stranger grabs her breasts from behind? Stand up, turn around and (try to) slap him? At least yell "get your hands of me pervert"? Or meekly ask her host to do something?
Then she always reacts in the wrong way. At the first lunch she is too shy to ask for a robe when it would have been easy. Then she sinks in herself in shame. Yet at the first bridge club meeting she is trying proud defiance (which would have worked at the lunch but of course not here).
Then she gives in to Em not because she's afraid of more nights with cruel mistresses but because she is afraid that Em will break her word. If she is afraid of that, why does she think she will honor her word in 2 years? Why does she not at least make Em spell it out instead of assuming and enslaving herself in her mind?
And then why doesn't she try to change the rules? She has information about the most intimate financial kind about Em. There's no dirt there? All the mistresses try to keep their club secret. There's excellent blackmail material there. Why does she not try to find other malcontent slaves and pool her resources? I one woman comes with a crazy story like that it's just a crazy story. But if a doctor, a lawyer, a stockbroker,... come out they tend to get taken seriously. If they had a united front they could get out from under the bridge clubs thumb (because they want to keep it secret). She's a lawyer for gods sakes, it's their job to sue people! Almost every reaction of Judith feels wrong. The author (not Em) basically boxes the character in, making her unbelievable.
The very bad stuff:
I find it very dishonest if a published author puts an excerpt of his/her purchasable books on this site without a disclaimer that the story probably will never be finished (on this site). I call that deceitful advertising. (6/10)
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nick10
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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that was awesome..these were the kind of stories i was looking for...stories like yours are wonderfully subtle and the person dominating is sophisticated and rich ...i hope you have more stories like these (9/10)
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voyuerboy
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Oct 30, 2005 |
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This story is great!! Will there be more chapters forthcoming? I will be waiting. p.s. Is this really how the upper class lives? (10/10)
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jenn33or
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Would love to read more of this story. I hope that the author continues. (9/10)
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yuni4u
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Sep 2, 2005 |
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I am very new to this site and to this lifestyle,but if this is what I have to got to look forward to,then 'Lead on Mcduff',a very well written and intriguing story,may there be many more Chapter's (10/10)
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tinybean
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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Excellent writing, well balanced and paced..A very enjoyable read, and i hope for many more chapters !!! Thank You for sharing this story. (9/10)
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ravenfish55
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Aug 28, 2005 |
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a good,well written story, good descriptions and a good storyline. (9/10)
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gianna70
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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the best story i ever saw at this library (10/10)
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Granite_II
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Aug 18, 2005 |
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Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.
(10/10)
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ROBERTAR
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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Dear Arika, Great story. Love to see lawyers get theres.Can not wait to see how far J sinks for her career. (10/10)
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rilawild
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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I'm really enjoying this story. It's well written and moves along at nice pace. I'm looking forwards to next installment. (10/10)
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pet10
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Jul 31, 2005 |
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The story is full of wit, readable, deeply interesting. I think Arika is probably a woman author. She is well up in world of women. Two very strong women fight a duel in the story. Both alike have own interest. Emily has a huge advantage over Judith. But I think she wants to play only with her, she won’t bring her to ruin. Such are the women! Judith is at the mercy of her slave but she makes a great profit from slavery. It’ll read very interesting at what price she’ll play…I wonder! (10/10)
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rainbow001
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Thank you for posting this story. Very enjoyable. I look forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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oliveroflondon
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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A good storyline - shades of Whore 94 - a professional woman's debasement to further her career. Well written.
This story is developing tremendously. I really look forward to each episode. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Thank you for taking the time to give my work a positive notice.
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| Reviewer:
Woodchuck
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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Furious all girl action, along with wealth and power???? SIGN ME UP!!
Add the fact that the whole thing reads with out me stumbling through nuts and bolts errors.
Thumbs up (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Speaking of stumbling...I am pleased to have stumbled upon a theme you enjoy.
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| Reviewer:
ms2bused
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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Thoroughly enjoyed this extremely sensual story that is well written, and void of typographical errors! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Thank you so much. I found a couple but they will be corrected with the next installment.
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| Reviewer:
sub_for_you
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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Very well done. I love stories about rich sexy dominant women who can have anything they want ... like naive young ambitious professional girls. I hope this becomes a very long story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Thank you. It is not overly long but I hope you continue to enjoy what there is of it.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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good start, I like to see were this leads to. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- So smiling. Thank you. Nothing stirs a writer's soul as does faint praise.
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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Well written. Nice tempo. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- I appreciate your kind words.
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| Reviewer:
moonbeam1999
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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Excellent story. Very well written, wonderfully descriptive, and excellent plot. Please continue it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Arika Lee
(Edit) (Jul 14, 2005)
- Sorry to have been so tardy in responding. Thank you for a pleasing review.
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