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Coming Home
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 11, 2005)
(This month 11356 readers) (Total 20741 readers) |
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Daughter marries a black man who comes home with her and dominates her as well as her mother. His mother joins in the fun. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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i realy enjoewd the story it was uniquely different i hope you plan to add more soon (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jun 11, 2005 |
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Once again, this so-called author shows his lack of skill by failing to use punctuation as simple as quotation marks. A possible decent story ruined. (3/10)
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