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Cheating Eva's
Author: Master Browne
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(Added on May 28, 2005)
(This month 26205 readers) (Total 68881 readers) |
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A story about a girl that gets cought cheating a uni by another student and is blackmailed into becomeing a slave. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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where is the next chapter? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
uppitywoman
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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Painful, painful, painful (& not in a good way ;) reading with appalling spelling & grammar. Sorry to be harsh, but unfortunately the storyline doesn't make up for the effort it takes to plough through it. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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May 31, 2005 |
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The spelling and grammar were just too hard to get past. If English isn't your first language then perhaps you should get someone else to proof read the story before posting. (2/10)
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tieria
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May 31, 2005 |
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Sorry, but the author's spelling and grammatical errors ruined this story for me. Please, please proofread your stories, use spellcheck or get someone else to read it for you. (1/10)
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spicym
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May 30, 2005 |
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good story but need to check spelling (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
oliveroflondon
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May 30, 2005 |
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We have all read, and enjoyed, this type of story before: student caught cheating is blackmailed into becoming a sex slave. This story adds nothing original except for the fun of interpreting the author's English: 'cavalry canceled' for 'carefully concealed' or, my favourite: 'tight treasure's' for 'tight trousers'. Note that Mkemse, who gave this story 10/10, has as many spelling errors in his one paragraph review as there are in any paragraph of Cheating Eva - are they related? (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Masterdesire
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May 28, 2005 |
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I was quite put off by this story, not only from the extremely inadequate grammar. The storyline was not believable either.. mediocre at best. (1/10)
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RhondaLee
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May 28, 2005 |
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The mis-spelling of certain words really de-rail from the enjoyment of reading a story. (3/10)
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Jacen
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May 28, 2005 |
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Nothing special here; virtually no detail and the entire story seems to be told by one of those blonde ditzes who never pause for breath. The only good things of this story are the short length, and it's a textbook example of what can go wrong when you only proofread using a bad spell checker. (6/10)
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mkemse
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May 28, 2005 |
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Need I say more, altho the spelling is real bad and the grammar is poor, i realy enjoed reading it as i could, please work harder on speeling and grammar (10/10)
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