|
|
|
|
|
One Intense Evening
Author: Psycho Lotus
|
| |
(Added on May 25, 2005)
(This month 8930 readers) (Total 19833 readers) |
| |
A housewife makes the mistake of refusing her Master's sexual advances. Now she has to pay. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 5 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
100% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (8/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (8/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 20, 2009 |
| |
nicely done (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
rce
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 3, 2005 |
| |
I agree with the previous reviewers. I like short stories like this, where you do not have to wait for a sequel. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Ruby
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 28, 2005 |
| |
Fun little story, with lots of pain, bondage and excitement. When she was scared, I was scared with her. The visuals were excellent and I enjoyed her master taking control. An editing refresh would pop this up a notch in ratings. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
pinto
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 26, 2005 |
| |
good story line (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 26, 2005 |
| |
Wow, a very busy evening. You have a few typos and misused words a proper proof reading would help. , but the intensity of your story more than makes up for these minor problems (8/10)
|
|
|
About 