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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 18, 2010 |
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Nicely done "battle of wills", only, the battle isn't between two persons, but between a woman's rationale and her urges.
Great.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Clara H
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Aug 22, 2007 |
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Loved this, didn't want it to end, need more. Please write some more. 10/10 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
AllEars
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Another well written work by an author who creates her scenes with expertise. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Arcege
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May 26, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable, very viseral. Feeling how desperate the older woman was to break free, trying to come to terms with how her body is responding. I hope that you write more in the future. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 21, 2005 |
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hope you plan to add more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 21, 2005 |
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Quite a good little domination piece. The feeling of being out of control, under the will of another, comes through very well.
Your spelling is fine, but your grammar could use some work. For example, never use the same phrase twice in a paragraph, it stands out. Ideally, grammar should be invisible to the story you're trying to tell; anything that makes it stands out detracts from the tale.
All that said, it was most enjoyable. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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May 21, 2005 |
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Very Nice story, I hope there will be more chapters to come (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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May 21, 2005 |
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Short and bitter sweet, a well done effort. The eternal battle between our wants and reality, with the girl a harbinger of our failed present, now come to collect its due. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rabbit
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May 21, 2005 |
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Really liked it, enjoyed the theme. Please, please please write more. Want to see what happens at the slumber party!! Was disappointed that you didn't continue with your other story.... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
sub_for_you
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May 21, 2005 |
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Nice hot humiliation story. I love the young arrogant girl controlling her teacher. Oh if only that could happen to me! I'd do everything Rachael told me ... with enthusiasm! (8/10)
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