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Pleasure In Control
Author: julie<->julia
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(Added on Apr 29, 2005)
(This month 111081 readers) (Total 219542 readers) |
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Julia lands a dream job with a top fashion lingerie house that leads her into a life of beautiful women and daring sexual exploits. In this autobiographical story, Julia explores her sexuality and her body as well as her new contacts. Gradually she pushed the boundaries of her experiences and enters a secret world of lesbian passion, sex and more. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Voracious Reader
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Mar 25, 2015 |
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This is a fine, fine example of writing. Very detailed and has a very engaging story to boot. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Read this quite a while ago. Had a re-read to get re-aquainted and to my surprise, I even saw two added chapters in January 2008...
Not much to add to what has been said already.
Excellent storytelling combined with deliciously depicted characters and a great imagination.
Delightful read!
JJ (10/10)
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dadisch
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Feb 8, 2008 |
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A truly fantastic story. The descriptions are very vivid & for those who like lesbian action this is for you. For various reasons it has taken me a while to read it but I have enjoyed every page, especially the first few & the last couple of chapters. The idea of a straight woman being gradually encouraged to get involved, & enjoy lesbian love & domination really appeals. I found the underwear descriptions a real turn, especially when the leather & fetish wear was introduced. Pleae keep it up Julia although I do realise it has taken a while to write this story. Where can I find The Chair of Four Pleasures on the net please? I have looked all over the place but so far have drawn a blank. (10/10)
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smokey1957
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Jan 15, 2008 |
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It is always sad when a good story comes to an end . You want to know the end but when it is there it gives you an emty feeling. Thank yoy for youre story and the pleasure it gave to many readers. (10/10)
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Perrin
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Mar 26, 2007 |
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Very good. Really enjoyed it. It is fantasy with enough reality to make it believable. Ver well-written, although at times, especially in the beginning, a bit repetitive (that's probably because I am nto a huge fan of lingerie descriptions :)). When are the next two chapters coming? (8/10)
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alecto
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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Wow. amazing story, which I loved every chapter of, some more than others. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. (10/10)
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mandri
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Nov 23, 2005 |
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AMAZING. I hav been rerding stories/novels for last 10 years but god this can kill u slowly n irony is that u would want more. i m dying to go n read beyond chapter 10. see im out of words when i sat writting to u. anyways thanks for this tintalizing seductive literature (10/10)
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bibba A
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Nov 6, 2005 |
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Very good story.. Iloved every chapter of it. Pleas keep up the good work. Are ther coming more of??? (10/10)
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gianna70
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Aug 22, 2005 |
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very good story, i enjoy every part (10/10)
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pert
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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I have only just finished the first two chapters but I feel that I must leave some comments straight away. This is simply a fantastic story!
From what I have read you seem to have a great talent for creating intrigue and suspense. The plot looks to be well prepared and all I can add before continuing is that I can't wait! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (Jul 18, 2005)
- Hi! thanks for the kind review. I'm pleased I can keep you in suspense and even more pleased that you seem to enjoy it! That' excatly what I like to do. You're really going to like the story as it unfolds. If you send me an e-mail via this site I'll let you know when new chapters are posted. x Julia
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Woodchuck
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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I'm hooked. There are so many good characters that I can't decide which one I'm pulling for Julia to ensnare next. (9/10)
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NistShadow
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Jun 23, 2005 |
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i enjoyed this a lot (9/10)
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La Toya
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Jun 15, 2005 |
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A slow start is better than no start. This first chapter is well writen. Lets see were you go from here.
May 4, 2005- This is getting hotter.
June 15 2005 - This is getting even hotter (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 25, 2005)
- Hi, I've already submitted chapter two, it should be posted very soon so look out for it. It continues to set the scene for the rest of the story and contains more detailed description to please lingerie fetishists & voyeurs, but you'll have to wait for the sex to hot up. It's coming soon and I hope you will be too!. Keep reading. Julia
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faust82
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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After the first five chapters, there's only one thing to say about this story; Truly and remarkably excellent.
The story starts rather slowly, almost teasingly, as the characters and plots are revealed. This drives me as a reader to keep reading, never getting bored despite the initially laidback pace.
The plot was believable in a fairy-tale sense. There's no way any woman would ever be this lucky. Still, the author manages to convince me this is all real.
The visual descriptions were vivid and captivating. They were detailed enough for me to see where the author was going with this, yet still vague enough for me to form my own mental images as I read on.
The characters were well constructed and described in a lifelike manner.
I liked this story because it's very much different to the hardcore stories I usually read. It's exciting and incredibly sexy without ever having the characters actually touching skin.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (Jun 10, 2005)
- Thanks, it's great to get a well-thought-through and objective review as this helps me with my writing. But I hope my story gets you hot too!
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faust82
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2005)
- Oh, trust me, it does. Finished reading it now, and I can't wait for the next part :)
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oliveroflondon
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May 30, 2005 |
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I am really enjoying this story. The first six chapters were painfully slow - but we all like pain otherwise we wouldn't be here! Serious raunch factor in Chapter7. Abigail and Vicki - I love you. I think that the story is fabulously written - you believe it could be, and certainly wish it was, non-fiction. Thank you Julie. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2005)
- Who says it's fiction?
x Julia
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pierced_sub_lez
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May 24, 2005 |
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Julia,
I love the story so far. Keep up the great work and make sure some intense bondage makes its way into play.
love lexi (9/10)
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Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (Jun 3, 2005)
- Lexi, I really hope that you will not be disappointed, but this is my story and you will have to like what I like!
x Julia
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nottytales
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May 22, 2005 |
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A must for those with staying power. As a dyed in the wool bondophile I'd like to see more earlier, but the best is worth wating for, and after all, it IS about denial. Terrific attention to detail and beautifully constructed. Keep up the excellent work, and please keep the messages coming. (10/10)
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nova
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May 12, 2005 |
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Loving every minute! Keep it up! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 12, 2005)
- I will!
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| Reviewer:
Kingcodez
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May 11, 2005 |
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Great Story keep 'em comin.
You're a talented writer. (10/10)
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duckiesca
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May 10, 2005 |
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You are into mu fetishes exactly. Keep it up. I lioke the slow buildup. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 11, 2005)
- Thanks for the review - I've sent you a Private Message
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| Reviewer:
DJ Tuk
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May 5, 2005 |
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Waiting for the rest - brilliant (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Clirover
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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Well writen opening chapter. Good use of punctuation and grammar. Promise of more erotic content to come. (10/10)
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Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- Hi, thanks for the compliments. I've already submitted chapter two, it should be posted very soon so look out for it. It continues to set the scene for the rest of the story and contains more detailed description to please lingerie fetishists & voyeurs, but you'll have to wait for the sex to hot up. It's comong soon and I hope you will be too!. Keep reading. Julia
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bracemaiden
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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I agree with mkemse; "So far, so good. Let's see where it goes from here." (8/10)
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Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- Hi, bracemaiden, thanks for the review. I think you're going to like the chapters where I describe my corsets. Keep reading! Send me a message by e-mail if you'd like to give any further input. Julia
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mr addams
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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ts so amazing, I havent read a story this good (or this hot) in a long long time
my sub and I thank you
keep it cumming, err i mean coming! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Julie<->Julia
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- Hi, thanks for the compliments - I'm glad you're enjoying reading about me and my exploits. I've already submitted chapter two, it should be posted very soon so look out for it. It continues to set the scene for the rest of the story and contains more detailed description to please lingerie fetishists & voyeurs, but you'll have to wait for the sex to hot up. It's comong soon and I hope you will be too!. Keep reading. Julia
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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so far so good let's see where you go from here (8/10)
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