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Working Away
Author: RopeBinder
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(Added on Apr 13, 2005)
(This month 16900 readers) (Total 25731 readers) |
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Sara and Jeffrey meet online, but quickly bore of its limitations and meet in person. As Sara's first time, her boundaries are tested, desire versus sensibility, if you will. This steamy story feels real for great reason... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Well paced, well spread story. Well balanced too, emotionally especially.
Very good character studies in a nutshell. Real people going through real emotions, seeking, taxing, surrendering.
Nice.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jeremy Binder
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Aug 29, 2006 |
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Looks like an early piece. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
janey
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Apr 16, 2005 |
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This story didn't jump out at me at first, but the more I read it, the more the descriptiveness captivated me. The bruised tip of a penis is nothing that I've ever heard before, but describes his need beautifully. I thought the dialogue was trite, at times, but far better than most, including some published work. I really enjoyed the characters' relationship and wish the story would continue. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ropebinder
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- Actually, the "bruised tip" was coined by a talented co-writer. This is one of two collaborations in my collection. Thank you for your review.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Very nice! I look forward to seeing were the story leads (8/10)
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- Replied by:
ropebinder
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- Unfortunately, even when I intend to continue a story, it often never happens. My mind and life are not in the same place they were when I started. As such, I continue with something new, rather than try to "put" myself back in that place of long ago.
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| Reviewer:
tethered
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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I very much like the dynamic and dialogue between the characters. I felt like the author went deeply inside their minds and told the story from the inside. While I agree that this story follow a common theme line, it was so well written and drove home a passion that most stories miss. I highly recommend it! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ropebinder
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- You are very kind. I've always put great thought into dialogue, unspoken fantasy and the stuggle of the mind. My favorite scenarios are those that pit sensibility, vanity and self-control against the unyielding forces of sexual curiosity, desire and need.
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rce
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Apr 13, 2005 |
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Good, but it was by no means unique, which lowers my score. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
ropebinder
(Edit) (Apr 16, 2005)
- For anyone author who has spent years writing, it's so interesting to read their stories in chronological order. Everyone changes and evolves. This is one of my early stories, and while I still enjoy it, the writing feels naive to me now. Thank you for your review.
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