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A Visit to Dr. Bevertail's Clinic
Author: Wareagle
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(Added on Apr 9, 2005)
(This month 22821 readers) (Total 55592 readers) |
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A Divorced woman visits a special clinic that deals with sexual issues. Part one has little "sex" in it but sets the mood for the rest of the story. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BadCitten
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Oct 6, 2006 |
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well i know it has been years sence you have last written a chapter but i wish you would continue the story i would like to see what happens to her. (9/10)
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pventola
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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needs the rest of the segments to be absolutly great but good for now
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sassyy
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Jan 17, 2006 |
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I like your writing , and I think when you continue It will be better (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Apr 23, 2005 |
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The groundwork is there, but lacks alot of the descriptiveness needed to make it great. (4/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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Well hopefully the story will improve. The basic idea is there but the author just needs to be more agressive and descriptive in telling the story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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So far, nada. Poor grammar and spelling undermined any interest the ideas might have sparked. Unfortunately, all I found was a froth of ideas, or maybe only concepts, with no execution or follow through yet. Hopefully that is coming in the next installments, or I will need to revisit my rating. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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I think the author, should tell the readers that the first two chapters are just the set up for what is to come. If up coming chapters dont show improvemnt, I will have to lower my rating of the story (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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yuck says it all hope ot improves with more chapters (2/10)
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Sumisoauno
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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Seems the story had more to do with changing clothes than anything else! Not very impressed thus far! (2/10)
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