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Punished After Cheating On My Girlfriend
Author: Peter Allow
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(Added on Apr 7, 2005)
(This month 11530 readers) (Total 24278 readers) |
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Leila caught Michael cheating on her in her own bed. Her revenge came with putting him for sale in a gay bar, where the highest bidder got him for two day teaching him to cheat for real. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 10, 2005 |
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Poor thing. I strongly recommend every male who has or ever thought about cheating read this. I liked the plot. I like to see people get what they deserve.The writing was pretty good but it seemed to be set in one tone the entire story. On your next story, stir things up a little bit more. Keep the reader guessing. Overall it was a pretty good read. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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ok but not really to much into femdom but a goos story anyway (7/10)
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Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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Nice story, I think he got off easy for cheating. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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Excellent story. Well worth the read. Great story telling and I hope to see more on the subject. (7/10)
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