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Mistress Tracey's Delight
Author: Michael Michelle
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(Added on Mar 26, 2005)
(This month 18823 readers) (Total 41707 readers) |
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Wall St. Michael recalls the first meeting he had with Mistress Tracey, a meeting which instantly and forever touched his buried submissive spirit. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Jan 24, 2008 |
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very good.more please. (9/10)
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jchorner9
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Apr 18, 2007 |
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Great story. The psychological aspects of domination and submission are so much more interesting than whack..whack..whack stories, though whack whack is what ultimately occurs anyway if you follow the drift....Thank you for sharing. (9/10)
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redbtmboy
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Jun 20, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable! I love stories with male submissives. I found myself completely engrossed in the story and waiting for more. The technique of changing the time in the story kept me on the edge of my seat. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- hey red
I haven't been here in a coon's age, maybe more than a year and it's so nice to have received your review. many thanks. I'd love to hear if you have any more specifics. thanks for reading it, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. feel free to criticize, I've learned a ton from nice people. Or tell me any thing that appeared new or told in a new way that interested you. thx
best,
Michael
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BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Good stuff. Very well written. Captures well the dreamlike aspect of submission. Thanks. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Aug 27, 2005)
- thanks Big Cat
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Wind
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- bigcat,
so sorry for the long delay in acknowledging your review. I'm glad you liked it and your comment was informative.
best,
Michael
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| Reviewer:
subregi
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Apr 22, 2005 |
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I liked the story but I too found the style of writing sometimes was confusing especially to the end. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2005)
- subregi,
thanks for the feedback. I understand. perhaps I was quick to publish it.
best,
Michael
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 28, 2005 |
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The idea of the story was excellent but maybe some history as to how Mistress Tracey and Michael became would be in order. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2005)
- slaveneedledick,
thanks for your reading and thoughtful input. this is an excellent suggestion.
best,
Wind
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Mar 27, 2005 |
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Although I generally prefer stories with female submissives, this was quite good. It was full of intriguing ideas. I enjoyed it a bunch. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2005)
- LordVetinari
Thanks for your kind thoughts and words.
best,
Wind
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 26, 2005 |
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this story was well-written, but i got kind of confused towards the end. i just didn't understand what all was going on ... probably, just me! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Wind
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2005)
- Dear bisarah,
Mistress Tracey thanks you for your feedback and is emabarrassed that you had been needlessly confused by the writing in her story. The situation is being rectified with more thorough proof reading for clarity.
i am to also let you know that I received, happily received and thank you for, two severe strokes with the paddle tennis racquet, one on each side of my bottom (and part of my thigh) from my dear Mistress Tracey. There are 48 square holes on the face of the racquet. 11 clear square imprints from these holes were made on my left side. Only 4 were very clear on my right side. Mistress Tracey promises your satisfaction regarding clarity upon the next re-write. My falilure to satisfy you will result in my achieving 48 clear square marks from the paddle holes on each of my sides, at the pleasure of Mistress Tracey.
My dear bisarah, this submissives begs your pardon and requests your most exacting literary standards be applied to your next review if you would be so very kind.
thank you for your consideration and the review of this story.
best,
Michael
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