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The Mandolin and the Magneto
Author: Cortez
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(Added on Mar 19, 2005)
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Africa; present day and one of the more unpleasant military regimes. A young woman thought that it would never happen to her...until someone else betrayed her to the security police. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
2licks4u3
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Mar 22, 2005 |
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wow! I was taken there...sweating...a adrenilin rush. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2005)
- Thanks for the response - part of the challenge is to provide a believable setting and situation for each story. I'm delighted to have succeeded.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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no complaints here either (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2005)
- Once again my thanks for taking the time and trouble to read and respond...the encouragement does help...honest!
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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"Get out of my mind, damn it! My thoughts are my own!" Yes, it feels like the author is reading my mind. So delightfully cruel, so wonderfully vicious. I love everything this author has written, but this was the best so far, in my arrogant opinion. Electricity and pussy torture, what a combo! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2005)
- How delicious! If time and other commitments allow I will be worming my way into you imagination again in the near future. Just think...the capture, the growing terror...then that dreadful realisation that it's all real and they are really going to strap you down and...
Thanks for the enthusiasm...yes, there will be more...
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| Reviewer:
bdsmkier
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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well written and imaginative
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2005)
- Many thanks for taking the time to comment - glad to know that readers do enjoy the stories.
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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Solidly and well written, and reasonably sexy too. I like background and character development though, even in a short story, and I really don't see either much. Still, quite adequate. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2005)
- Like a number of my short stories I'm more intent on capturing the snapshot of a particular incident so I provide only hints and suggestions to sketch in the briefest of scenarios as to why she is in the situation. It's the balance between the actual interrogation and the development of plot and character. Thank you for taking the time to respond however, it is appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
cindi
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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This one is well written and imaginative. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cortez
(Edit) (Mar 20, 2005)
- Many thanks for taking the time and trouble to log a comment.
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