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The Life of Amber Gleason
Author: Dave Robinson
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(Added on Mar 12, 2005)
(This month 10216 readers) (Total 26695 readers) |
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The Story of a young women exploring her sexual fantasy's, who quickly finds out there her most frightning nightmares. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MstrThor
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Mar 18, 2005 |
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Good start needs some refinment and more development. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grako
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Mar 16, 2005 |
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Lots of promise. Part 2 could be an improvement on writing skills - but the story line is developing well. (5/10)
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ropeburn
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Mar 14, 2005 |
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Atrocious spelling ruins story. Just a few examples:
"questionair"
"fantasys"
"funloveing"
"message poped up"
"possitive"
"orenge"
"she could feel her bowls giveing way"
There are five spelling/grammar errors in the story title alone! (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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3 is very genenrous, go back and read the story, needs help to manythings to list here (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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i am not certain where to start here. it is entirely possible that this story might have a bit of promise, but who would know with all the typos and use of the wrong word. You need to get a typing program with spellcheck and grammar and use it. And you need to learn the difference between ad/add, there/their, and others. Get a nice book on writing and improve your skills and try again. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
allstar
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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There may be quite a decent story somewhere in there, but I doubt many will see it given the atrocious spelling and grammar.
It may be a stroke story, but read it before you submit it- or, at the absolute least, spell check it.
If you can find an editor, there may well be some potential there.
(2/10)
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