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A Pony for Her Sweet Sixteen
Author: Cerberus
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(Added on Mar 8, 2005)
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A beautiful teenager is invited to her uncle's horse farm to celebrate her Sweet Sixteen party. Will she get a pony for her birthday, or will she become one? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Dryhill
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Jan 2, 2012 |
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I agree with Major Littmann and jip. The one really stupid bit about this story is why would any parent spend large sums of money sending their daughter to a private school for a decent education when they know they are going to sell her to become a pony girl? To make matters worse there are three other parents who do the same thing. Far to unrealistic even for a fantasy story. (4/10)
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lovetotyegirls71
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Oct 18, 2011 |
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absulityly great story both parts were excellent i just love hoe the author showed the toture of each girl.once beyond 10 (10/10)
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Major Littmann
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Oct 10, 2011 |
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A bit too standard and predictable, not thought through enough to be believeable because generally people don't hate their own children, and not particularly horriffic, chop their arms at the shoulders dont just cuff them if you want to shock. (5/10)
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Oct 7, 2011 |
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maybe too long? (7/10)
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That was seriously fucked up! (10/10)
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MissPiss
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Nov 23, 2007 |
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This story was well written, but at times the story was just too unrealistic for me to be "shocked" by the things that happened. But nonetheless, a great read. (6/10)
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jip
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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Sorry to disagree, but "selling children" and the way even her mother reacts I don't find it credible. The story could be improved with a few changes.
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Kira
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May 16, 2005 |
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I like this story very much, hope to see a new part next time. (9/10)
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Ruby
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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A fine begining. The story is simultanously shocking and compelling. There are excellent visuals and enough character development to make me say - more please. (8/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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i can't for more!!! a good plot line for lots of fun things! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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can't wait for more (9/10)
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MstrThor
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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Well Written Would like it to continue
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La Toya
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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Good start, I look forward to more!! (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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There are certain authors on this site whose works I always read and enjoy, and Cerberus is one of them. This is a good addition to his corpus, or in simpler terms, "A good one!" (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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An interesting tale .It is well plotted well written and imaginative. There's even a touch of comeuppance, which always makes for a satisfying plot ploy. We eagerly await the next chapter (8/10)
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theargonaut
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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Interesting (if only partial) departure from the Thanatos series. Starts off with a strong story, but quickly returns to a Thanatos-type story. Overall a good read. (7/10)
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