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My Friend Becomes My Mistress
Author: slut pooja
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(Added on Feb 28, 2005)
(This month 28602 readers) (Total 66693 readers) |
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A Girls Best Friend Becomes Her Mistress And Kept Her As Her Dirty Slave. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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Very poor grammar & a rushed story. I couldn't finish it. Although I do like the plot of a best friend becoming her mistress. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
slutpooja
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Jul 17, 2011 |
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story is good . i think u forgot something in middle to write. its a gr8 story. keep writing with the help of some good english known person. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 4, 2005 |
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The plot of th story was a good plot. The author however, could improve it by better English. If English is not the author's native language maybe the author can have someone proof read it and fix it so the story flows. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Celtic_Dragon
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Could be a good story, but could not get though it due to the poor grammar.....sugest having someone edit. (2/10)
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ms2bused
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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THE STORY HAS MERITS BUT IS RUINED BY THE BAD GRAMMAR! (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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the synopsis and the story line had me realy hoping for a hot, hot story, what an increable let down (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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The story line was pretty good, and the contorted grammar gave it some credibility - like how an English-second-language person would narrate an experience, but it jumped around - like releasing an enema before it was given, misused and misspelled words. This author needs an editor and a spell checker. (3/10)
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