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The Ultimate Submission (Jacqueline's Story)
Author: Gato Medio
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(Added on Feb 28, 2005)
(This month 107393 readers) (Total 168234 readers) |
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Hi! I'm Jacqueline, and in this story I share with you what happened to me since I first felt this inexplicable urge to touch myself and decided to ask my friend Charlotte for advice. The story ends a few years later, when I'm getting ready for the ultimate submission. |
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JohnGrey
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Apr 14, 2012 |
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Extremely well written and edited. Author creates authentic characters and places them in believable situations. (10/10)
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ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Oct 15, 2011 |
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Given the plethora of good stories on this site, it is very hard for a story to stand out. Just because you mention cunt and penis in the same paragraph doesn't make it above average. i admit, it is very difficult to write a good story, but this is just too trite. Being there done that stuffs. I glimpsed through the first chapter, which was disappointingly dull and the second chatper was no better. (4/10)
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bigcat
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Feb 25, 2006 |
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Really an excellent piece, very well written, a terrific erotic tale. While perhaps not as extreme as many fantasy pieces on this site, this story rates quite favorably with others of this genre, including even the classic "Story of O." (10/10)
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robert216
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Apr 11, 2005 |
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Well done. Good pacing and charactor development. The ending seems to lack the "zip" of the rest of the writing. The details of Jacqueline's actions and even more so, her emotions are the stories highlight. The purification sequence did not seem to achieve the desired effect. I think better communication between Ramon and Jacqueline would have been a better solution to many of their difficulities. (9/10)
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SubDanny
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Apr 8, 2005 |
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I greatly enjoyed the story. It was well written and expressed her desire to serve. I was though expecting her Masters to mark her say pierce her nipples or clit or to have a tatoo placed on her. also was wondering about her to girlfriends from the villiers what had become of them and Ramons two friends. (8/10)
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jasons_slve
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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i enjoyed this story very much. i always waited till the next set of chapters were posted and couldnt wait. very good job (9/10)
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joegsch
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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The pure enjoyment of her sexuality and her willingness to try everything without guilt, makes this heroine my kind of girl. I look forward to reading more of her adventures. (10/10)
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Kingcodez
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Mar 9, 2005 |
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Probably some of the best stuff I've ever read. Keep it coming. (9/10)
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La Toya
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Very well done, I llok forward to more! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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what i liked about the story is that the slave is telling the story, makes it much more believeable, i hope you plan to dd more, as it gets hotter i will adjust my review accordingly (8/10)
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