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Ann and I
Author: An Erotic Pet
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(Added on Feb 26, 2005)
(This month 65131 readers) (Total 102887 readers) |
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A surbuban wife and mother has her world turned upside down by smooth lady predator. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (9.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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Such a good story! Unfortunately it looks like we will never get more. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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The only word that comes to mind right now is "Extraordinary"... The only word needed, too, really. JJ (10/10)
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Reviewer:
BruceCC
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Oct 23, 2006 |
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One the hottest stories on this site. It is a shame that the story has (apparently) been abandoned. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
adiladawne
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Apr 23, 2006 |
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Loved this, can't wait for new chapters. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
sub_for_you
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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This is soooo erotic! Why can't this beautiful Ann come visit me? She could make me her "nasty girl." I wouldn't even resist. I have only one bit of feedback. You called Ann a predator in your synopsis. I would call her an angel that came down to deliver Deborah from her boring existance. You write so beautifully. Don't make us wait too long for more! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Uathrich
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Mar 16, 2005 |
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Loved this one....read and enjoy (10/10)
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Reviewer:
emmacd
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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That was a lovely seduction. One that would have ben proud of for both parties thoroughly enjoyed Emmacd (9/10)
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Reviewer:
sunburststrat
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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A beautiful seduction story. My favorite part is when Ann has to get firm with her new conquest, with the line: "Deborah, this is not all about you. Come here. We are not nearly finished." That kicks it into high gear! Please give us more! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
jmar
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Mar 2, 2005 |
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Very Sensual story. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
EstabanBacca
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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This story was recommended to me by another author. I was not steered wrong. Delightful! The slow build of erotic tension is almost tangible. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Microwave0ven
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Beautifully crafted story! Your descriptions are excellent, and though there's not a lot of sex in it, the whole story so far is very seducing. Eagerly hoping that you'll write more! (10/10)
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ms2bused
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Feb 28, 2005 |
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As Ann is seducing, and subjecting Deborah to her whims, it would have been SO much more exciting if Ann required oral adoration whilst continually teasing/denying Deborah ANY orgasm there by addicting her to her divine taste! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
EstabanBacca
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2005)
- This type of review irritates me because it denigrates a well crafted piece of writing soley because it was not the story the reviewer wished to read. Why people will insist on parading their ignorance shall remain one of the universal mysteries I suppose!
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 28, 2005 |
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The author has a wonderful command of the language. The story exudes sensuality. It's a great read. I'm anxiously awaiting more. This story needs a 10 rating (10/10)
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Reviewer:
bisarah
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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wowzer!!! i need to pay more attention to others in the produce section of the grocery. this story was very well written and had a good pace to it. i hope you will be adding more ... please??? (10/10)
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Reviewer:
misti_chaton
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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wow, this was a hot story. thanks a lot. (10/10)
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