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Breakfast with the Doctor
Author: Dr. Wellhung
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(Added on Feb 26, 2005)
(This month 11344 readers) (Total 25764 readers) |
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Michelle meets Dr. Wellhung for breakfast. She is not allowed to wear her panties. Dr. Wellhung retrieved his fork and sat back up and looked into Michelle's eyes while he licked his finger and said, "It tastes like you are in heat my dear".... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
wannabeXopsed
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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Thank you, this was a very enjoyable piece for me. I like the humiliation of exposing herself to the good Doctor. (8/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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a good story and it was was well-written. i especially like the name Dr. Wellhung! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
robbermagnet
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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Very well written. I think I'd like more detail about the sensations Michelle felt in order to make it a bit more realistic. Especially when the doctor is fucking her with the ben wah balls in. Even if you say something like "Michelle felt an incredible sense of fullness as the ben wah balls were pressed further into her," it would make it more believable. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jadetiger
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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The plot was believable and realistic. I truly enjoyed it. The visual descriptions were subtle but hot. I found myself wishing I was Michelle. The characters were charming. I liked this story because Dr. Wellhung obviously takes care of his property and her needs. His ability to judge Michelle’s limits and to guide her through her tasks was well written. I thought this story could have been a bit longer. I was left wanting more. My favorite character was Dr. Wellhung. I am very interested how a Dom interacts with his slave and what motivates him. Michelle’s descriptions of her Dom were very enlightening and I am sure he will give her everything she craves when he feels she is ready.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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great start. let's see where you go from here (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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Great little story Dr W. Hope it's not just a teaser for your web page. Would love to see some others posted. Still not sure her HMO will cover this (9/10)
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