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Shannon's Wager
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Feb 14, 2005)
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A young woman seeks to reclaim her land by offering her body as collateral for a hunt. She loses and must face crucifixion as her punishment. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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nicely conceived idea, well written story (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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Nice concept, good job writing it and excellent paceing throughout. Charecters are believable and well developed. Keep up the great work (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2005)
- I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm contemplating a sequel for the characters, if I can get the time and figure out a plot. Thanks for the review!
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Feb 17, 2005 |
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Very exciting and entertaining to read, with a good starting idea and a surprising end. Some passages are only for the friends of really hard stuff.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2005)
- This was somewhat of an experiment for me, imagination-wise, to see how far I could go with a character without going to the point of ridiculousness. Hence the harder passages. Still, I tried to incorporate a love theme (somewhat) at the end because I believe all good stories should have a happy ending.
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Feb 16, 2005 |
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Excellent story. There is always a little more suggested than what actually occurs - the fear of rape, the terror at injury or worse. Grat use of suspense. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Feb 16, 2005)
- I'm glad you liked it. I had the benefit of several editors who had experienced crucifiction and had helped me with suggestions on the process and the emotions that the victim would feel. While they would prefer to remain anonymous, I feel I should at least acknowledge their assistance. So, THANK YOU!
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| Reviewer:
emmacd
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Feb 16, 2005 |
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It was a good story and well written. The suspense was there to theend. Write again. emmacd (9/10)
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