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Cyndi's Audition
Author: Jerk
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(Added on Feb 12, 2005)
(This month 15451 readers) (Total 43499 readers) |
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Under a hypothetical government that seeks to convert its young female population into sex slaves, a seventeen-year-old cheerleader is arrested, abused and tortured. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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A little background depth, even just a few paragraphs, would be easier to get into than a story which just jumps right into the action. This kind of start makes it more of a jerkoff piece than a story.
You do get into some of it towards the end. Perhaps further chapters can rectify the problem. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
SimonMagick
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Feb 13, 2005 |
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Very excellent writing. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 13, 2005 |
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hope there is more to be posted (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Feb 12, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable. I hope this is only part one of a number.
I would be interested to get some background (is the new government a dictatorship, one-party state..? And what options do the real elites have over the slaves..! (8/10)
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