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Aurora, Sexy Assassin II
Author: joaquin d bootboy
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(Added on Feb 8, 2005)
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This is the sequel to the first episode. Aurora lures her next victim away from the safety of his guards enticing him with her sensuous ways and alluring charms. Witness how Aurora reduces a vicious criminal into her willing dog slave before he meets his end. |
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Sep 7, 2011 |
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Well, I actually like comic-style stories now and then. Yet the Diablo and the Desert Eagle struck me, too. There's space for a briefcase and some small bags under the front bonnet of a standard Diablo (if it's a GT, forget about the bags).
The heroine may be able to handle the pistol's recoil, it's the .357 SIG, not the .50. But, as Wistan already wrote, the gun is far too impractical. Go for a Glock 31 or 32. (8/10)
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Wistan
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Not a bad concept, but it's executed a little clumsily. The grammar mistakes are annoying; the author needs to use a proofreader (I'd be willing if you're interested, joaquin).
There's also a bit of a credibility gap here; Aurora is just a little too good to be true, things happen just a little too easily for her, the stories are just a little bit comic book for my tastes. I feel bad complaining about it in a way, because I think such fantasy-type stuff is what the author is trying to do, kind of like a sexed up version of James Bond, but just a little more realism would improve things in my opinion.
Also some of the little details are off. For instance she drives this Lamborghini Diablo, but there's no possible way you could fit a man in the bonnet of one of those things. She carries a Desert Eagle pistol, but while it's popular in movies it's a stupidly impractical weapon that no real assassin would ever carry, especially a female one - she'd likely break her wrist if she ever fired the thing.
Again, I don't want to go overboard on the criticism because this is an interesting story idea and if it was improved in a few areas it could be a really good series. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 22, 2006 |
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I loved it ! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nancy Boots
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Feb 9, 2005 |
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Let's see MORE sexy sequels to this theme.....
very good stories, but phraseology needs improvement......Book 1 was excellent, Book 2 great.....how about Book 3???
Nice to see a female who uses "Sex as a Weapon" AND can "dress for success"
Does AURORA take on female villians too????? I can only immagine THAT one!, but might prove to be the start of another plot.
Keep up the good work...my kind of "P-I" this "beats" re-runs of the Rockford Files.....
PS: WHERE can you hire a "chick" like this!!!
Nancy Boots (8/10)
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- Replied by:
bootzluv
(Edit) (Feb 9, 2005)
- thank you for your generous review .... although I feel I dont deserve it as much as the praise what with the lapses in grammar construction.... anyway... Im trying to improve. thank you again.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 8, 2005 |
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This is a good premise, but the author needs to find an editor to work with for a while. The constant problems with grammar detract a great deal from an otherwise good story. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
bootzluv
(Edit) (Feb 9, 2005)
- thanx for the review. I sure need some help in editing. what can I say.... Im an amateur. but thank you nontheless. :)
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