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Darkest Desires
Author: gaberial lair
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(Added on Feb 4, 2005)
(This month 46384 readers) (Total 80274 readers) |
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Charlie has grown restless of the challenge of breaking new boy after new boy. His eyes have been set on a young nineteen year old, who has no idea what the Sadist is planning. Walking into Charlie's studio for a set design job, robbie has walked right into the trap. Has robbie gotten himself into more then he can handle? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
denisgem
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Jun 24, 2005 |
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i want to be robbie in the worst way! (10/10)
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Microwave0ven
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Keep going! Awesome story, really looking forward to what's going to happen! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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what a GREAT twist at the end. i can curious to see what happens next. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
gaberial_lair
(Edit) (Mar 12, 2005)
- thank you for the review. i think you will enjoy what is to come.
gaberial lair
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Feb 12, 2005 |
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Hot story with just the right amount of giving and taking. Made me want to join right in!
I'd pop this up to a 9 with a "tense" refresh. That is - sometimes the writing is present tense -he picks up the... and others its in the past - he picked up the... It's an easy fix, but take your time. Looking forward to further chapters.
Chapter Two - even hotter. Whew! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
gaberial_lair
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2005)
- i'm glad you enjoy the story. Thank you so much for taking the time for write a review. i hope to have chapter 3 coming out soon.
gaberial lair
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| Reviewer:
Roland
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Feb 5, 2005 |
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Very well done boy. I am pleased ! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
gaberial_lair
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2005)
- Thank You, Sir. Not only for Your review, but for the push to submit my story to the website. You know the rest *wink*
gaberial lair
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