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Avatar - Establishment, Book 2
Author: Dark Pen
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(Added on Jan 29, 2005)
(This month 92428 readers) (Total 133699 readers) |
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This is a continuation of the first Avatar Book and picks up directly where the other one left off. |
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Average (?):  (10/10) |
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| Reviewer:
PhallenFoenix
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Aug 11, 2012 |
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Amazing beyond belief. I follow on your other sites, but I highly recommend this series to any reader. (10/10)
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cece3457
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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Love it! would love to read more of the Avatar series! I know you don't post on this site anymore(I read your earlier replies to reviews)...so could u please send me the link to the site where you do post? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DarkPen
(Edit) (Nov 1, 2008)
- Sure. I don't have your email, so feel free to send the request to darkpen@gmail.com
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story.
Pen
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Maitre1962
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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Both Avatar novels are ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!! I read both of them with GREAT pleasure!
Rarely have I read a story ,that has held me as spellbound as this one did!
My adniration goes out to you,Dark Pen!
Kindest Regards,
Maitre (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
virgingirl
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Aug 13, 2007 |
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It's everything I would expect from a continuation. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DarkPen
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2007)
- Glad you like the story. This might be an indelicate thing to say, but well... I don't post here anymore. There are 14 more chapters of book 2 on the SOL website, as well as links to my blog, should you be bored enough to want to read that!
Thanks for the glowing reviews, I appreciate them.
Pen
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Jendo
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May 23, 2006 |
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The only problem is where is the rest?!?!?!? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DarkPen
(Edit) (May 23, 2006)
- Well, let me say this about that. There are 3 more chapters that I have written and posted on another site. You can email me and I'll tell you where, since I feel odd about posting it here. You can also get information about the story on Livejournal at darkpen.livejournal.com. The other site contains a fifteen chapter side story that picks up right after chapter 20, but if you don't read it, you won't be missing anything.
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| Reviewer:
Pamaj
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Dec 10, 2005 |
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Briliant. Hopefully the new chapters will be available soon. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DarkPen
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2005)
- Thanks Pamaj. I don't know when the next chapters of Avatar will be available on this site, or even if they will. That will depend on the new owners and their decisions on underaged charactors.
Also currently, there is a side story that I am posting on another site. That is why there's been no updates here. If you email me, I'll send you the link to the other site.
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CrazyMe
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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Like the first one, this one has a good plot and is well written. The sexual acts are exciting and described very well.
I still feel that the attacks on the Christian Church are somewhat unjustified and unfair. After all both USA and USSR were Christian nations when they managed to send people into space and land on the Moon, right? So perhaps progress is possible?
About the political views, I can't really say whether they are valid, since I don't live and never have lived in the USA (thank you, Lord).
Nevertheless, I am really looking forward to the next chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Pamaj
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2005)
- Maybe this isn't the right place for such a discussion, but mostly i agree with Dark Pen about the "Christian Church" things. In my country (in central europe) the Church is not in such control yet, but they are making a hard time trying and are harassing all around telling people how they should think and even feel. Go on Dark Pen, you have my sympathy.
And BTW CrazyMe, you are wrong about USSR. They tried to express socialism and it had nothing to do with the Church. And the progress thing? It has nothing to do with the Church too. Last 85 years (after the WW1) people are simply trying to find the ultimate way to destruct themselves and most of the progress is simply an outlet of this all. The Church tried to keep us in Dark Ages and failed, since then they are only trying to keep up and influence all they can manage.
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Sep 23, 2005 |
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Highly enjoyable. Well written with excellent imagery and character development.
(10/10)
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Gemna
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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As promised, book two is more focused on the plot compared to book one. I am intrigued what is going to happen next, especially about the sensei. (10/10)
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lordchaos359
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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Don't agree with some of the political veiws, but an excellent piece of literature and I can't dock the aouther for not agreeing with my personal veiws. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
DarkMatter80
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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I loved the first book, and the second is (as of chapter 6) a worthy continuation.
*hoping for many more chapters* (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mackie
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Feb 23, 2005 |
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More, more, more! These series (including bok 1) are rising above the level of 'just' a well written erotic story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lockeed
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Feb 6, 2005 |
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Loved the first one, cant wait for the second one! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Jan 29, 2005 |
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just as good as the last one cant wait for more (10/10)
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