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The Collectors Estate
Author: BDSM_Tourguide
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(Added on Jan 11, 2005)
(This month 87335 readers) (Total 206005 readers) |
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A group of wealthy men and women from all over North American form a society whose purpose is to collect men and women to serve the society as slaves for the founders' amusement. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpanker
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Jan 15, 2011 |
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A wonderful descriptive read. I wish there had been a vivid spanking scene in it, but besides that my panties are dripping. (9/10)
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Dick the Slaver
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Dec 15, 2005 |
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I enjoyed your story very much. I hope that you will post more chapters in the future. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Dec 16, 2005)
- I won't be. The new ownership of this site has chosen to remove all stories featuring the "young" story code. Therefore, this story and others like it are going the way of the dinosaurs. Very shortly, all of my stories will be removed from this site. Likely, they will be posted to a new site.
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GRPub
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Nov 18, 2005 |
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Great! He or she put a lot of work into this. It shows. (10/10)
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redEva
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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I like the detachment and “snapshot movie” style you are writing this in. It is quite enjoyable the way you are building the suspense, and your descriptions are very good bringing the scene to life. Good job TG, congrats … looking forward reading more of this! (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jul 10, 2005 |
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Interesting idea. A bit cliched, but well-executed. (8/10)
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pejanon
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Jul 3, 2005 |
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If this is a foundation it's going to take a huuuge edifice to justify this. For now this is as hot as tour in the meat processing plant.
Hope I'm proven wrong. (6/10)
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robert216
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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Excellent elaborate story line. Looking foward to more chapters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 3, 2005 |
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Very nice story. I look forward to more. As I read I may just have to raise my rating of this story (7/10)
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Dancing Hateful Thin
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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I'm torn. On the one hand, I like the basic premise of the story, but there's a curious sense of anti-eroticism throughout - it's almost too clinical, too much about a general sense of malice without any sense of the erotic. It seems detached, almost distant. Of course, we're only three chapters in, and things could change. I'm hoping so; I like the premise. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Feb 10, 2005 |
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As you build your characters and storylines this could easily raise in rating. An excellent work in progress. (8/10)
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submissiveStud
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Feb 2, 2005 |
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great theme i can't wait to read more
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spitman
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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I never saw so many codes for such a short piece - I think we would need to at least get in the door of this story before paying enthusiastic compliments - so far the place isn't even furnished. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Jan 14, 2005)
- The story will be updated monthly. I would hope that poor rating you have given it will improve as the new parts are posted.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 11, 2005 |
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No complaints here (9/10)
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